Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Differences in Online Writing and School Writing

My writing for online it definitely different from traditional school writing. When I write stuff online, I do not consider grammar rules. I just write what I want and do not care if I use the correct pronoun rules and stuff like that. When I write for school, I make sure all of my spelling, grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure are accurate.

When I write for school, I am not really motivated to write because I am assigned a certain topic. When I write online, I write whatever I want. I do not have a specific topic to write and can write on whatever I want.

When I write for school, my purpose to write is for a grade and because I professor wants me to. When I write online, my purpose is because I want to write. I may write to release steam or to get thoughts out of my head.

When I write online, my audience is myself and my friends. When I write for school, the audience is the professor, so everything has to be perfect.

In conclusion, all of my techniques for writing is different for online and school. Online writing is just for fun and is not really formal. School writing is assigned for a specific topic and is more formal.

November 16th Log

Text Messages: 15
Technology: Cellphone
Audience: Mom and friends
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: Tell them stuff, ask them stuff, and get answers
What happened as a result: I got answers
Revision: None

Write down Log: 1
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Myself
Thought employed: A lot because I had to think about all I had written and count texts
Why: Make writing blog easier
What happened as a result: Easier to write blog
Revision: None

Facebook Chat: 4
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: My friends and me
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: Tell them stuff and ask questions
What happened as a result: Got the answers I needed
Revision: None

November 15th Log

Caption for Facebook Pictures: 1

Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: My friends
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: So my friends could see my pictures from Formal
What happened as a result: I got comments on the pictures
Revision: None

November 14th Log

Text Messages: 6
Technology: Cellphone
Audience: Friends and mo
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: Tell them stuff
What happened as a result: They got the information I needed to get to them
Revision: None

Write Down Log: 7
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Myself
Thought Employed: A little because I had to remember all that I had written and count my texts
Why: So I would know what to write on my blog
What happened as a result: I could write my blog easily
Revision: None

English Class: 1
Technology: Pen, paper, dry erase marker, and whiteboard
Audience: Class and Dr. Wardle
Thought employed: A lot because we were coming up with ideas for a paper
Why: Need to write one more paper
What happened as a result: Got ideas
Revision: None

Government Notes: 1
Technology: Pen and Paper
Audience: Myself
Thought employed: A little because I had to remember what my professor said
Why: Have notes to study for the final
What happened as a result: I have notes to study
Revision: None

Blog: 1
Technology: Computer
Audience: Myself and Dr. Wardle
Thought employed: Some because I had to add details to my log
Why: Homework I had to do
What happened as a result: Got my homework done
Revision: None

Email: 3
Technology: Computer
Audience: Myself and someone else
Thought employed: A little because I had to make it sound right
Why: Professional reason
What happened as a result: Got my answer
Revision: None

Facebook Chat: 2
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: Myself and my friends
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: Talk and catch up
What happened as a result: We caught up
Revision: None

Wrote on Someones Wall: 1
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: Friend
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: To tell them someone
What happened as a result: Told her what I had to
Revision: None

Status on Facebook: 2
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: My friends
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: Tell my friends what I am doing
What happened as a result: They knew what I was doing and I got comments on it
Revision: None

Comment on Someones Status: 2
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: Friend
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: Tell them what I thought
What happened as a result: They got what I had to say
Revision: None

Comment on my Status: 1

Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: My friends
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: They asked me a question
What happened as a result: I answered their question
Revision: None

Filling out papers for work: 10

Technology: Pen and Paper
Audience: My employer and the Federal Government
Thought employed: A lot because I had to think about all of the information they were asking
Why: Needed to if I wanted to get the job and paid for training
What happened as a result: I got paid for my training and my employer got the information they needed
Revision: None

Friday, November 14, 2008

November 13 Log

Write Down Log: 7
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Myself
Thought Employed: A little because I had to remember what I wrote down and count my text messages
Why: So I would know what to write on my blog
What happened as a result: I could write my blog easier
Revision: None

Text Messaging: 11
Technology: Cellphone
Audience: Mom and friends
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: To tell them stuff, ask questions, and get information
What happened as a result: They answered me most of the time. I got the information I needed 
Revision: None

Human Species Notes: 1
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Myself
Thought employed: Not really a lot because I really did not take a lot of notes
Why: So I could have notes to study
What happened as a result: I didn't really write a lot
Revision: None

Introduction to Education Notes: 1
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Myself
Thought employed: A lot because I had to remember what the professor said and summarize it
Why: Have notes to study for my exam
What happened as a result: I will have notes to study for my final
Revision: None

Introduction to Education Activities: 2
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Professor and group members
Thought employed: A lot because we had to come up with examples
Why: Professor told us to 
What happened as a result: We did the activity
Revision: None

Blog Log: 1
Technology: Computer
Audience: Myself and Dr. Wardle
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: Homework assignment
What happened as a result: Finished my homework
Revision: None

Comment on My Facebook Status: 3
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: Myself and friends
Thought employed: Not a lot because my response was easy
Why: Comment on what happened
What happened as a result: Answered each other
Revision: None

Email: 1
Technology: Computer
Audience: Someone
Thought employed: A lot because I had to think of how i wanted to word things
Why: (not telling) professional
What happened as a result: Still waiting for a response
Revision: None

Facebook Chat: 3
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: My friends and I
Thought employed: Almost none
Why: Catch up
What happened as a result: Caught up
Revision: None

English Homework: 1
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Myself
Thought employed: A lot because I had to think about what was being said and I had to find the three moves
Why: I needed to do it for class
What happened as a result: Finished my homework, but I also fell asleep
Revision: None

Status Change on Facebook: 2
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: My friends
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: Tell them what I was up to
What happened as a result: Got some comments on it
Revision: Some because I changed it a few times 

Comment on Facebook Notes: 2
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: Friends
Thought employed: A little, but not a lot
Why: Respond to what people said
What happened as a result: People heard my opinion
Revision: None

Facebook Notes: 1
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: Myself and most of my friends
Thought employed: A lot because I reflected on my new place and realizations I have been having
Why: Tell people about my new place and what I have been thinking
What happened as a result: People commented on it
Revision: None 


Thursday, November 13, 2008

November 12 Log

Text Messaging: 41
Technology: Cellphone
Audience: Friends and mom
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: Tell them stuff, ask them stuff, and catch up
What happened as a result: Most of the time they answered. I got the information I needed and they got the information they needed
Revision: None

Facebook Chat: 13
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: Me and my friends
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: To catch up, to ask questions, and to give information
What happened as a result: Most of the time they answered. I got the information I needed and they got the information they needed
Revision: None

Write on a Person's Wall on Facebook: 7
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: My friends
Thought employed: A little because I had to think about what I was going to say and how to word it
Why: To ask questions and give information
What happened as a result: They got the information and I got the information I needed
Revision: A little bit because I read what I wrote before I posted it

Write Down My Log: 4
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Myself
Thought employed: A little because I had to remember what I wrote and I had to count my text messages
Why: So I would know what to write on my blog
What happened as a result: I could write my blog easily
Revision: None

Government Notes: 1
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Myself
Thought employed: A little because I had to remember what my professor said so I could write it down
Why: So I would have notes to study for the exam
What happened as a result: I have notes to study
Revision: None

English Class: 2
Technology: Pen, paper, dry erase marker, and whiteboard
Audience: Myself, my classmates, and my professor
Thought employed: A lot because we had to think of the answers to the questions
Why: We had to answer questions on the worksheet
What happened as a result: We finished the worksheet and understood the article better
Revision: A little because I spelt somethings wrong on the whiteboard

Introduction to Education Papers: 2
Technology: Computer
Audience: My professor
Thought employed: A lot because one of the papers I had to remember all of my service learning trip and the other I had to think of what I thought the goals/purpose of schools should be
Why: One was for a grade and the other was extra credit
What happened as a result: I finished my papers and turned them in
Revision: A lot because after I wrote them, I reread them to make any changes that needed to be changed

Comment on Facebook Note: 1
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: My friend
Thought employed: A lot because I was giving her advice on a situation 
Why: She needed advice and comfort
What happened as a result: I would hope that my advice helped
Revision: None

Tuesday, November 11, 2008

November 11 Log

Blog: 3
Technology: Computer and Blogger.com
Audience: Dr. Wardle
Thought employed: A little because I had to decided the answers to the questions
Why did I blog: I have to keep track of all of my writing for class
What happened as a result: I get a homework grade
Revision: None

Write down Log: 15
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Me
Thought employed: Not a lot really because I just wrote down everything I wrote
Why: So I could know what to put on my blog
What happened as a result: I wrote it on my blog
Revision: None

English Homework: 1
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Myself
Thought employed: A lot because I had to find the three moves and the findings in the reading
Why: I had to read it for class
What happened as a result: I finish my reading for class
Revision: None

Government Homework: 2
Technology: Pen and paper
Audience: Myself and my government professor
Thought employed: A lot because I had to summarize the information for each question to answer it
Why: It is due tomorrow
What happened as a result: I finished the assignment
Revision: There will be some when I type in up

Text Messaging: 23
Technology: cellphone
Audience: Mom and friends
Thought employed: Not really a lot
Why: To tell them things or ask them something
What happened as a result: I got responses most of the time and they got the information they needed
Revision: None

To Do List: 1
Technology: Whiteboard and Dry erase marker
Audience: Myself
Thought employed: A little because I had to think of my homework
Why: So I know what homework I have to do
What happened as a result: I will not forget my homework
Revision: None

Email: 2
Technology: Computer
Audience: Government professor and team leader
Thought employed: Not a lot because they were really short and simple emails
Why: To ask my government professor a question and to tell my team leader I am going to the social tomorrow
What happened as a result: I got the answer to my question
Revision: None

Facebook Message: 1
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: My date to Campus Crusade Formal
Thought employed: A lot because I had to find the picture with the color of my tie
Why: She wanted to know what color my blue ties was
What happened as a result: I would hope she likes my ties
Revision: None

Facebook Chat: 1
Technology: Computer and Facebook
Audience: My friend
Thought employed: Not a lot
Why: To tell her something
What happened as a result: She did not answer
Revision: None